WOW! i really like this poem you can feel the emotion and power in each word you use, very good. it paints a picture in your mind. i love it!
XOXOx
Kamille
P.S. come check out some of my poems! i think you will like Saftey Pin. thanks!

Hey thanks, i appreciate the advice and the comment.
This poem is really great, you definitly can feel what you're feeling and what you've been through. keep it up!!

Ur rite i do like it!! it is great!!

Fantastic.. this is beautifully written, and so full of the pain as it once was.. I think you have done an amazing job, here.. I hope you will write more, soon.. Well done. xx

Well done...the words spoke themselfs...great illustration...check out my new one "A pain"..not as good as yours but i try

I don't know why you don't write more! Jeeze! You're a great writer. This poem shows that you felt deep for the topic you were writing about. It had a lot of emotion, even though the flow wasn't terrific. Keep it up! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha