Perfection

Good poem,very good message

Wow this is amazing. i know many people that have tried to lose weight this way but it doesn't work out and its the worst way you could ever do it. this poem has a great message. your poems are amazing and i can't believe your so young and write so good. a future in writing is in store for you.
5/5

-chelsea;

ps. thank you for the sweet comment. your poems are simply amazing and i want to write like you.

Lovely poem, good job!! Awesome message!! 5/5!! Keep up the awwesome work! I love reading your poems!! Thanx for the comment, I will try that!!! 5/5
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

This was good. A good message and had a good flow. good job. 5/5

thanks for the comment

OMG! thanx. 4 being such a great role model. ur young but you can write. dont stop writeing!