Good poem. So many of my friends think that starvation is a good way to lose weight or forget the past. Good job.

Nice poem! good job !
thanxx for commenting on my poem hun! take care

Nice poem! good job !
thanxx for commenting on my poem hun! take care

I think most girls at some point in their life go through just a bit of this.... great job, keep it up! and thx for commenting on my poemm
**Emily**

Thats true...stupid celeberties are goin crazy bein all anorexic ..and so many girls are pressured to loose weight..ood poem..me likes (:

I can also relate to this one... a had a little problem with the whole eating thing.
good job

THiS WAS CUT3..

Haha!i love it!!!!!!!5/5

This is cute...and thanks for the comment sweet heart..lol...

Every single girl needs to read this poem and then they'll understand how NOT to try and lose weight!
Well done in writing such a powerful poem in such simple words
5/5
*Gem*

OMG! thanx. 4 being such a great role model. ur young but you can write. dont stop writeing!

This was good. A good message and had a good flow. good job. 5/5

thanks for the comment

Lovely poem, good job!! Awesome message!! 5/5!! Keep up the awwesome work! I love reading your poems!! Thanx for the comment, I will try that!!! 5/5
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

Wow this is amazing. i know many people that have tried to lose weight this way but it doesn't work out and its the worst way you could ever do it. this poem has a great message. your poems are amazing and i can't believe your so young and write so good. a future in writing is in store for you.
5/5

-chelsea;

ps. thank you for the sweet comment. your poems are simply amazing and i want to write like you.

Good poem,very good message