I like this poem alot...
What I liked the most is the last part.
It was pretty kewl.
Nicely Done ~_~
well hope to read from ya soon
ByE

Wow! This is really the best love poem i have read in a very long time I do like your style IT SEEMS AS THE WORDS CAME STRAIT FROM YOUR HEART

Comment by Tripp on a thread in the forum:

Another amazing poem...even better than the last one I read. I liked that last
bit about the death of you was them. It was a great line, and like the rest of your
stuff, rhymed and followed rhythm to perfection. Even better than the last one I read,
you are an excellent writer...

Omg, a very nice poem that i really enjoyed reading.
a very beautiful one,
keep up the great work like always
5/5

This was intresting, I only got thrown off on one part, other than that, the whole entire poem was really well written, and I enjoyed it.

Very nicely written...
The use of words are perfect..
LIke it a lot

That was very deep and meaningful. A nice job, truly.

This has so much emotion thru out the poem, the last stanza was very clever

bravo, clap clap. 5/5 David

Hey really good poem. i relly liked it!!
stacey xoxoxox