Broken

by Miss Megan   Aug 19, 2006


Soft heart,
silent tears.
Dark nights,
many fears.
Slit wrists,
all alone.
Drip blood,
on my own.

[i dont really like this one.some advice to improve it would be much appreciated!]

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  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    ^^^I really agree. I wouldn't change a thing..I loved this. I feel this way a lot...it is really short but you really put emotion into it. I loved it, great job.
    5.5
    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Heidi Fletcher

    OMFG!!! this poem is incredable lol srry i dk how 2 spell but it is amazing!!!