I thought this was very interesting...I think this is about as short as you can make a poem and still call it a poem lol, well besides a heiku (sp?) I guess. I really liked it though...very unique...very short but you got your point across. I loved it.
5.5
Breanna

I liked this a lot. I guess it was the shortness. haha. idk...but this was good...straight and to the point i guess. I don't know what to say. i just liked it lol. btw, this is poetess...
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