by Nelle
WOW! that was amazing. I can relate to this alot. but i have never thought of it in this perspective before. i loved your description it was incredible. the flow and rhythm was perfect. i LOVE the story behind this. great great job! 5/5 |
Loved that perspective. Really that was something else. I liked how the blade was personified and given its views on cutting. The second stanza was awesome. Some choice words and some great descriptions. |
by Tormented
Wow! That was aweosme! jsut simply amazing! nice pescriptions..nice flow..nice rhythm ...nice choice of words..everything was like just perfect! loved it! Awesome Job! keep it uP! |
by BlueDreams
Oh my, another beautiful poem you potray here, flowed well with beautiful emotions... |