by Gary Jurechka Aug 19, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
As long as there is no revolution forthcoming, |
So deep and so true, truly amazingly written. I totally agree with the message of this piece. The first stanza is my favorite. I like the wording and the atmosphere that you created very much. |
by Gasttlee
The flow here is so deep, it's wonderful! 5/5 |
I lthink this is good i really like it, keep on writing |
by shana
Truly amazing, every poem you write is an inpiration to me... keep writing and i'll keep reading... |
Great poem thanks for comment on Let it be |