by Regie* Aug 19, 2006
category :
Fun, humor /
for kids
You walk in the door |
Ah omg i HATE THE DENTIST!!!! |
I think this poem lacked any, emotion. i know it's for kids, but still, i think a bit of emotion and a better flow, would have made this poem a better piece. sorry, i don't mean to be mean, but i thought you'd like to know the opinions of one of your readers. |