Hey whoever u are u are kinda scary but i like the poem!!

Satin lunged to wards the juggernaut.
((towards))
You will read the anarchy that bleeds out of these lines
((I loved these lines..))

This poem was really good.. It was very strong and kept through the poem. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Holy moly gosh goly. that was amazing and tragiclly tragiclly written. i am completely speechless. that was just AMAZING! i loved it! 5/5

Wow...awsome poem!!! i lik it alot!! keep on writing...another 5/5 for me!!

Hey amazing poem!
really spooky!
well done!
love mel

This was excellent I enjoyed reading it.

Wow.
this is so dark
i love it its very descriptive.
thank you so muhc for the comment it is appreciated SO much.
all the best to you
~Emah
5/5

Well, 4/5 u know?i dont put excellent unless it is WAW u know wat i mean, so 4/5 is something great for me, so u got 4/5, u showed me a great msg, ok i'll read abt ulol :) good one

Ok...I gave you a 4/5.

1) The flow wasn't all that terrific. You could work on it a little more. Maybe either smaller words to describe things, or possibly take out words that aren't at all needed. It would make the poem a lot easier to read. =)

2) I thought it seemed like you were just putting words together, and putting some words at the end of lines just for the rhyming scheme. Try not to rhyme so much. Poems don't have to rhyme to be good. =)

Keep it up! Great write! Hope I didn't offend you lol. Take it or leave it. =) xoxo 5/5

Samantha

Deep poem with such a great way to capture the readers attention. I enjoyed reading this piece. Well done :)

THIS IS AMAIZEING!!! i have read a bit of your things before adn this i have to say is by far the best i have read sofar... i LOVE this... and i know waht its like, honestly.. anyways, check out some of my stuff...
-Marina

I loved this poem it's so good! 5/5 Keep up the good work and please comment on some of my poems!!! Thanks!