Superman

by -The-Undying-   Aug 19, 2006


They say hes faster then a speeding bullet
well i say load the gun cock back and pull it
its worth it in the end, bleed and leave the pain to null it

my hero is someone who has no fear
who does not run away
that sheds a tear
when I leave today

my hero is always there for me
him/her will not leave in the night
my hero will get mad and then let it be
my hero is not afraid to fight
my hero is out there for everyone one to see
for if he left he/she would not feel right

superman, is not my hero
he is a actor that appears on my cereal
he is not there he is an absolute zero
he only wants what is material
he works for some big bullshit biro
he walks right past me.. seeming ethereal

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    "my hero is someone who has no fear
    who does not run away
    that sheds a tear
    when I leave today"

    that lines a really line coz your right! our hero must be no fear this poem is good i impress thanks for sharing

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    "my hero is someone who has no fear
    who does not run away
    that sheds a tear
    when I leave today"

    that lines a really line coz your right! our hero must be no fear this poem is good i impress thanks for sharing

  • 18 years ago

    by SomewhereAmongThePieces

    Change the he/she. I would suggest he because superman is well... a he. Otherwise an amazing poem. great work

  • 18 years ago

    by SomewhereAmongThePieces

    Change the he/she. I would suggest he because superman is well... a he. Otherwise an amazing poem. great work

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    They say hes as faster as a speeding bullet

    [ I think you need to re-word this line. It's not making much sense the way it is. ]

    for if he left he/she would not feel right

    [ All though the poem you've got he/she ..but then at the start of this line you have "he" ..maybe change or something? ]

    I love superman, lmao. That's why I read this one. but uhh, yeah. seems like you don't really like him that much... lol.

    Anywho, it was a pretty good poem. Keep it up!

    Natalie``

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