They say hes as faster as a speeding bullet
well i say load the gun cock back and pull it
((Lol! I love it!))

I loved this... It was very interesting to read.. Very different from the rest of those 'hero' poems. Nicely done.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

They say hes as faster as a speeding bullet

[ I think you need to re-word this line. It's not making much sense the way it is. ]

for if he left he/she would not feel right

[ All though the poem you've got he/she ..but then at the start of this line you have "he" ..maybe change or something? ]

I love superman, lmao. That's why I read this one. but uhh, yeah. seems like you don't really like him that much... lol.

Anywho, it was a pretty good poem. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Change the he/she. I would suggest he because superman is well... a he. Otherwise an amazing poem. great work

Change the he/she. I would suggest he because superman is well... a he. Otherwise an amazing poem. great work

"my hero is someone who has no fear
who does not run away
that sheds a tear
when I leave today"

that lines a really line coz your right! our hero must be no fear this poem is good i impress thanks for sharing

"my hero is someone who has no fear
who does not run away
that sheds a tear
when I leave today"

that lines a really line coz your right! our hero must be no fear this poem is good i impress thanks for sharing