Your the gurl in my dreams, ((girl))
Though I could never see your face,
Nothing in life is what it seems
((This whole thing was a very cliche rhyme..))
We mist every chance
((miss))

This poem definately was not your best... You could have done so much better, I feel. You have more talent than this, sorry.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5
True love can not be baughten
(('Baughten' Is not a word..It should be 'bought' which throws the whole rhyme off...))

Waisted Time

[ Wasted.. not waisted. ]

Your the gurl in my dreams,

[ You're not your and girl not gurl. ]

True love can not be baughten.

[ Is baughten a word? Is it meant to mean like bought? or something? ]

We mist every chance

[ I think you meant "missed" there, instead of 'mist' ]

This poem was kinda sad, but kinda cute at the same time. Nicely done though, and sorry about picking out all those little things, sometimes it just helps having those corrected. :] Great job though, keep it up!

Natalie``

Awww that was very cute. i'm guessing you are in love? or was? or whichever. either way your poems are great. exspecially the love poems.