Comments : I keep dreaming

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    And butterflies still stalk my emotions,
    ((I LOVED this line))

    I liked this poem... Again, it's not your best, But I could tell this was really thought out.. I love how you kept repeating certain lines. Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awe! I really liked this one, tooooo. Lol..I liked how you kept repeating "I keep dreaming" ...was cute. Tehe. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    I can also relate to this one alot. lol it was sad in a way but sweet in a way. if that makes any sense whatsoever. it was very heartfelt and beautifuly written. 5/5