To those who are home alone

by -The-Undying-   Aug 20, 2006


Many pplz asked me what the point of this poem is.. so here goes. The point is for people who feel depressed and just want to stay at home or have no friends and just wallow in there self pitty at home to have something to relate to. Maybe i might inspire someone to go out and do something new i dunno :)

To Those Who Are Home Alone

These times, im unsure you are my friend.
Sometimes, I wish death was pretend.
With crimes and lies, our love depends.

I have caused you pain.
I should not be able to love you again.
My tears how they rain.
Today I feel no pain.

These times without you, home alone.
These times im wrong to doubt you, your true intentions unkown.
These times I wirte about you, home alone.
These times we bleed, etched into stone.
These times we bleed... WHEN WE\'RE HOME ALONE!

And if we were to die today.
Would we fly to heaven, and all our problems taken away?
If we were to die today.
Would we go to hell, and forsaken pain our souls will pay?
If we had killed today,
Would I leave my body to a endless misery?
If we comitted suicide today,
Would it be for good intentions or would it be to betray?

BETRAY FROM HOME!
BETRAY FROME THE ONES WE LOVE, LEFT ALONE!
BETRAY AND RISE ABOVE, FROM ALL WE HAVE EVER KNOWN!
BETRAY... betray from you.

And if we were to die today.
Would we fly to heaven, and all our problems taken away?
If we were to die today.
Would we go to hell, and forsaken pain our souls will pay?
If we had killed today,
Would I leave my body to a endless misery?
If we comitted suicide today,
Would it be for good intentions or would it be to betray?

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  • 18 years ago

    by josh-and-valerie-together-forever-and-always

    Patrice is right whats the point

  • 18 years ago

    by AGirlWorthFightingFor

    I just read this and your TEENAGE ANTHEM poem. wow. I luv it. this is Henry Rollins intellectual punk-ish.

    keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    "I have caused you pain.
    I should not be able to love you again.
    My tears how they rain.
    Today I feel no pain."

    The 2nd line in that poem was way too long, there was too many syllables. Try, "I shouldn't love you again"

    "BETRAY FROME THE ONES"
    [From]

    This was an interesting poem. The rhymes were good, except that 'misery' didn't rhyme with the other words. Good stuff though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    I don't really know what to say about this poem. in a way i liked it but in a way i didn't there was just something about it that didnt catch my eye like it should have. i give you a 4/5 only because some of it was kind of off and some of it wasn't!

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    These line really kept my attention
    If we comitted suicide today,
    Would it be for good intentions or would it be to betray?

    ur poetry is really great! keep it up,
    love mel

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