Curse of Suicide

by Catastrophic Beauty   Aug 20, 2006


Laying in her bed with her pen in her hand,
Writing down the words no one understands.
Drawing all the reasons why she can't stand,
She's spilling all of her thoughts out once again.

Curled in the corner with her bloody blade,
Staring at all of the marks she had just made.
This is her perfect treatment, her perfect aid,
She's watching all her problems, slowly fade.

Hung from the ceiling, rope's firmly tied,
Holding her blade down, to her right side.
Stained on her face, all the tears she cried,
She has died from the sad curse of suicide.

This is just one of those 5 minutes or less poems...

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  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    I COULND NOT HAVE WRiTTEN THiS iN 5 MiNUTES! THiS iS AMAZiNG! GREAT JOB!

    x3--------SHELBY

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Really great poem...the stanzas were amaing in different ways...i liked all the ways she was hurting herself and trying to release the pain...good job 5/5
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    This is amazing as well... This has such a great story...and by god, I felt like you were writing about me (when I used to do that stuff)....It was like you were reminding me of it...which is excellent you could do that. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

    Comment again sometime soon... I may put you on my favorites if you do. =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Laying in her bed with her pen in her hand,
    Writing down the words no one understands.

    ^^I loved those two lines, they were both filled with great imagry and emotion. Loved them!!

    The poem itself was really sad. And I hope to God you don't feel like this at all. You expressed all these emotions really well. It was a great poem! Keep it up hun, and smile. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    5 minutes or less?!?!

    wow...in that case, you have some serious talent. I really like it...

    and thanks for commenting my poem. it really means a lot.

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