I thought it was really well writen. i could totally relate to that poem. 5/5
check some of my stuff out to.

..kristina..

5 minutes or less?!?!

wow...in that case, you have some serious talent. I really like it...

and thanks for commenting my poem. it really means a lot.

Laying in her bed with her pen in her hand,
Writing down the words no one understands.

^^I loved those two lines, they were both filled with great imagry and emotion. Loved them!!

The poem itself was really sad. And I hope to God you don't feel like this at all. You expressed all these emotions really well. It was a great poem! Keep it up hun, and smile. 5/5

Natalie``

This is amazing as well... This has such a great story...and by god, I felt like you were writing about me (when I used to do that stuff)....It was like you were reminding me of it...which is excellent you could do that. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Comment again sometime soon... I may put you on my favorites if you do. =]

Really great poem...the stanzas were amaing in different ways...i liked all the ways she was hurting herself and trying to release the pain...good job 5/5
love ya lots,
sore

I COULND NOT HAVE WRiTTEN THiS iN 5 MiNUTES! THiS iS AMAZiNG! GREAT JOB!

x3--------SHELBY