I know it's hard for u Emma, everything will be ok. she'll be alright. I'm definately praying for her, and i'm glad the c-section went ok. xox forever ur friend.
-Snoo

Loved it, sorry about your sister. :(
5/5

Hey hunni r u ok? stupid question!
i pray to god your sister makes it through!
im praying for you and your sister
love mel

Oh my gosh. I'm so sorry that this is based on true events, and I hope for the best for your sister.

The poem was nicely written though, the flow wasn't rocky, and I really liked your rhyming, didn't seem forced to me. A really sad write, I just hope all goes well. Keep it up.

Natalie``

Aww....so sad...it almost made me cry...of course i'll pray for her...stay strong...i loved the poem...5/5.

This is a gorgeous piece written in hard times. may the best come to your sister and her son. stnad tall, i know you can pull thru. i know this must be hard, a loved one of mine is currently in the hospital as well. i know where you're coming from. be strong.

Aww I'm a guy and even I wanted to cry. I wish you the best of luck and to just to let I will pray for you guys.

That so sad! I'm wow. I think I'm gonna cry..
Love you!
Heather

I really don't know what to say, i wish that everything is fine now i swear. i am sure that my prayers are not late. i will surely pray for them :)

Wow, this is the saddest and most touching poem I have read in a long time. It must have been heartbreaking to find out the possibility of your sister dying. I would hate knowing the fact you can lose someone, it hurts more than having them die unexpectedly. Anyways, this is a really good poem, and I enjyoed it. Thanks for the read.

The sad but beautiful. I love the way your wrote it. I hope your sister is ok..

The sad but beautiful. I love the way your wrote it. I hope your sister is ok..

Oh my...Great emotion within this poem.. Very strong. I really, really hope she's ok... Stay strong if she didn't make it.
Take care.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Great feeling i love it i will keeep ur family in my thoughts

Thanks so much I didnt expect so many replies and comments!

Thank you SO much.

She's on the mend and I hope she stays that way.

I appreciate this SO much

:D

~Emma
xoxo

Wow... i could feel the emotions.. godbless, i'll be praying for you and your family... :)

It is a relly sad poem but it comes from the heart and it has so much feeling, great poem by the way.
I hope that both jane and baby ryan get through this.

Awh. so sad. Im so sorry to hear about your sister, i hope your doing okay. the poem was wonderful your very good.

Oh jeez...i just want to let you know that after i read this, i prayed harder than ive ever prayed for ANYTHING before. This is an amazing and emotional poem. I hope everything works out! I would love to know what happened. I'm still praying for you! 5/5...hang in there. xo

Wow, that's great!