Awhh.. That was so sad hunnyy.. Keep your chin up! The flow was good and the descriptions were very detailed.. Nicely done 5/5

I really liked this one. i loved how it flowed. 5/5

Wow...dam girl your really good...i can feel your frustration to be left alone...your an awsome writer....keep me posted on your new poems...

Omg you poor thing that was so sad :(((( but but but soo good omg :) Keep it up <3'd it