Mmmmm weird.

That was a good poem. not weird byt he way. 5/5

Wow, those were some very powerful adjectives. You used them really well, and it made this poem very strong. I just think suicidal poems, or any poem that eludes to suicide is overrated. Sorry, but I just think that. Almost every other poem I read on here is about cutting or suicide. But still a good job.

Dang, now didn't you just describe about half the people in schools now a days? That sucks to be honest! Not the poem, but that fact that your right...and I hate it..and its time for a change...nice write I like how my eyes bounced from line to line!
Krissey

A bit weird.... but i know that u do a great job so just keep in doing god bless 5/5