The Girl Nobody Knows

by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-   Aug 20, 2006


I am the child
who wants to die
i am the child
who is asking why

i am the girl
who is only 14
i am the girl
who wont see 15

i am the daughter
who cried bloody tears
i am the daughter
who hides her fears

i am the girlfriend
who nobody cares for
i am the girlfriend
who each day bleeds more and more

i am the student
who on the floor bleeds
i am the student
nobody needs

i am the angel
who lives with slit wrists
i am the angel
who no-longer exists

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I liked the ending, but again, it was very cliche. It sounded like every 'I hate the world' poem.

    xDarkSuicidex 4.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissey

    Dear Child I hope this is not true about you. This was so sad for me to read because I am a person who deeply cares for the people of the world and when I read poems like these it breaks my heart because some people are blind to know that there are other people who will give anything to take these feelings away from you. I would if I could....keep your head up and on your shoulders right!
    Krissey

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    It seems like the title of this poem should be changed to "I Am", only because it would make it stronger in each verse. It was a good poem, but I didn't like how you rhymed 14 with 15.. lol but oh well. Still a good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Aline

    I don't know, it seems weak..u have a point in ur poem and u showed it, but a bit weak

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    OMG!! i luv this poem!! it relates to me soo much!! a 5/5 for me..keep on writing!!!

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