Six months

by Nelle   Aug 20, 2006


Today makes six months
All this time you have been gone from us
We miss you oh so very much
I wish we could just keep in touch

God called your name, and took you away
Hopefully I will see you again, one day
All this time we have been crying for you
I wish I knew what you are going through

Your in heaven smiling down
Oh how I wish you were here, on ground
You were so young on that night
So young in fact, it put you in a fright

My baby misses you more then anyone
He wants to give up and be done
You were his brother, his heart and soul
It killed him to have to put you in a hole

Don't be scared, I hear heaven is really great
I guess I will see when I get my fate
Please be safe and make it through
Please remember that, we love you

(We miss you soo much sweetheart, these six months have been horrible. but we are making it through, for you.)

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  • 18 years ago

    by NATALIE

    AWW I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM IT WAS KINDA SAD BUT VERY WELL WRITTEN I'M SORRY FOR YOUR LOST BUT REMEMBER HE/SHE IS IN A BETTER PLACE OK HUN TAKE CARE LOVE YOU BYE

  • 18 years ago

    by capnoats

    Good poem, i felt for you

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very sad poem. I hope you'll feel better.

    One thing, on the first line 3rd stanza, your should be You're

  • 18 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Good job on this poem this person was special to you which makes it even harder but great job on the poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Whew, it's good to have you back Nelle, but I wish it wasn't a sad poem I was reading. But I guess it's good to remember people who are no longer with you. Good job Nelle!.. Keep on smiling :)

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