I can tell that you sincearly miss this person that has past away. I can really feed off your emotions that you write! I really enjoyed this poem although it made me sad it was amazing!

Your feelings are brilliantly convayed in this peice. I saw a slight gramatical error at the begining of the 3rd stanza, I think it should be "you're" rather than "your". other wise the content is well presented and the ideas flow well, the rhymes at time may seem a little forced but they rocover quickly and take little from the overall peice. well written

That is sooo sweet. very very memorable and sincerely emotional. i loved reading it and the sadness touched my heart. i got shivers. 5/5

I am very sad for your loss sweetie. I guess the first 6 months are the toughest. You captured your feelings well. It was simple and honest and had a sweet overtone.

Whew, it's good to have you back Nelle, but I wish it wasn't a sad poem I was reading. But I guess it's good to remember people who are no longer with you. Good job Nelle!.. Keep on smiling :)

Good job on this poem this person was special to you which makes it even harder but great job on the poem

Very sad poem. I hope you'll feel better.

One thing, on the first line 3rd stanza, your should be You're

Good poem, i felt for you

AWW I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM IT WAS KINDA SAD BUT VERY WELL WRITTEN I'M SORRY FOR YOUR LOST BUT REMEMBER HE/SHE IS IN A BETTER PLACE OK HUN TAKE CARE LOVE YOU BYE