The soft touch of love

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Aug 20, 2006


Love? a feeling, Impossible to describe.
Love? a feeling, From which you cant hide.

When love catches you, you know its true,
When you truly love him, and he loves you.

The world around you seems so small,
He is there to catch you when you may fall.

It fills in the missing piece, of the heart,
And you shall never want to be apart.

Together you appreciate the life you lead,
On each others thoughts you will feed.

The light of dawn, makes you feel strong,
You sit in the sunlight, with him all day long.

He calls you his baby, and you call him the one,
He helps you with the things you need done.

At night you lie, underneath the stars,
Kissing his cheek softly as you lay in his arms.

Finally, end, Beautiful night,
Waving goodbye, he disappears from sight,

Will you marry him? no? yes? maybe?
But it doesn't matter now because he is your baby.

this is a poem i wrote a few years ago i found it this morning when i cleaned my room lol let me know what you think :):):):)

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  • 17 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    This is a fantastic poem, loads of life and energy flowing from it. great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by timehealsallwounds6

    This poem is amazing i love it keep up the great work hun!

  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    I really like the beginning of this poem-- the question format works really well.

    The rest of the poem is pretty good, too, but the first lines are definitely my favorites.

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww it's so cute. =P I love it! It's exactly how I feel about someone at the moment. It gave me a really warm and touching feeling. =) Great write. 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by cut from the [scene]

    I love it, the words match perfectly.
    I had to read it twice to take it in. :]

    It's beautifuly done. Definatly 5/5!

    [& Thanks for your sweet comment.]