Well spoken and very nicely penned, great job!!!

This is a beautiful poem of young, early love, yet you have have captured the essence of love for one beyond your years.Great flow and such heartfelt emotion.Well done.

GaryJ

I love this poem because of all the emotion I get from it my boyfriend and I have felt like that a lot. Thanks for commenting;;)

Awsome!!I love the flow!!So great!

I love this poem. It makes me want to jump on my boyfriend and hug him and never let him go. It actually does describe love. Its awesome! Keep it up.

Oh I love it!!!!!!! defanitly a 5/5

I love it, the words match perfectly.
I had to read it twice to take it in. :]

It's beautifuly done. Definatly 5/5!

[& Thanks for your sweet comment.]

Aww it's so cute. =P I love it! It's exactly how I feel about someone at the moment. It gave me a really warm and touching feeling. =) Great write. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I really like the beginning of this poem-- the question format works really well.

The rest of the poem is pretty good, too, but the first lines are definitely my favorites.

This poem is amazing i love it keep up the great work hun!

This is a fantastic poem, loads of life and energy flowing from it. great work!