by Sweet lig Aug 20, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
It is too hard to accept |
Another good poem, but the first stanza didn't really make sense. There were mispelled words and missing words. You wrote: |
This is a really beautiful poem. It's just those spelling errors that kill the poem. It's good though! |
by SpEcIaLmE
Wow this was very emotional |
by Miu
Aww very very emotinal. Yes, goodbye is sometimes all we need, I really loved the topic, and that can take that poem in different ways. Touching piece for me. |
by Blissful
I could relate deeply to the emotion you are describing in this piece. It was sad and heartbreaking. I truly enjoyed it. Well done *5/5* |