Goodbye is one of the hardest things us humans have to say. There are so many people I am planning on meeting from PnQ and I already think of what the goodbye will be like. I also hate when people leave and don't say anything....nice write
Krissey

Another favourite.

I like the anger in the poem,I can see it explodes.Mixed with regrets and pain.But you should work a little more on the structure I think.It's more prose than poetry,it sounds like a letter which you set up in verses.For this reason,I'm giving you a 3...go on,keep writing!

I think that this would be a wonderful poem if you would correct the spelling and work on the flow. I like the whole concept of the poem, but it was very hard for me to follow the poem because of the spelling and the flow. If you can correct those errors I say that you have a masterpiece on your hands. Don't get me wrong hun, I too make the same exact mistakes sometimes. I love when someone points those mistakes out to me because I feel that they help me to grow more as a poet. So I hope my critique did not offend you because I would love for you to point out my mistakes to me also. I think that you have a wonderful talent. You just need to take your time and get your flow right and make sure that your, grammer is correct and you'll be wonderful. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Keep up the good work and remember what I said. 4/5

Love
Letty

This is pretty darn good. it acuritely describes the feelings of the situation. It sttruck home for me in the fact that im going through a situation just like this one and i know how it feels

I could relate deeply to the emotion you are describing in this piece. It was sad and heartbreaking. I truly enjoyed it. Well done *5/5*

Aww very very emotinal. Yes, goodbye is sometimes all we need, I really loved the topic, and that can take that poem in different ways. Touching piece for me.
5/5 Amazing, keep that up!

Wow this was very emotional
it was well written and kept me reading till i finished which is a good thing :P
u have alot of talent
good job

5/5

This is a really beautiful poem. It's just those spelling errors that kill the poem. It's good though!

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Another good poem, but the first stanza didn't really make sense. There were mispelled words and missing words. You wrote:

"It is too hard to accept
You leave me with out
Saying goodbye
I felt you cheat me
Not only once!"

I think it sounds better like this:

"It is too hard to accept
You leaft me with out
Saying goodbye
I felt you cheated on me
Not only once!"

I think it sounds better. Other than that, it's pretty good.

.:CiNdY:.