I like this one, again short but very sweet.
thanks for ALL the comments it was like WOW
I was starting to give up cause I've had so many downvotes without anyone telling me what im doing wrong.

Its been really fustrating.
Thank you SO much
your a beautiful poet and i'll keep in touch.
~Emah
5/5

I'm starting to really like this form, and to me it just feels as if it's getting popular with some really talented writers. Your poem holds enough truth to let the message shine on it's own.

Wow Natalie! This poem was so true, inspiring and has a beautiful message. I really like this style of writing. && I like how you use different writing styles. (5/5)

Excellent Lanturne Natalie, and thank you for your wonderful comment on mine as well. Please don`t give up on the diamante, it is really worth the try. Thanx, Timothy r

Aww I loved it babe. For it being so short it had great emotions in it. it was very powerful and you got your message across clearly. it was amazing. ilu! 5/5

Great job on this!!

Interesting!

That was a great write Nat!!! Very inspirational! That something I don't read often in poems. Good stuff SMAWCE sister!!

Basic concept, very true.

Awwh, that was awesome hunny! The words you used were perfect and all fitted in the syllable counts.. You said so much in such a few words.. Wonderful work hunny, Ily! 5/5

I love the message given in this poem! wonderful Lanturne as well. i love how this poems are so short and have so few words in them and yet they speak wuch powerful things. great job.

~Jacklyn

Nice poem...veryy well put together...5-5