by Raychil Aug 20, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
He was taken away so soon |
by Roxy
Omg!! thats great so peacfully sad but also perfectiant its just great and so very deep sorry for there loss but by any chance are the childrens name jake, mitcheal and ive forgoten the other name |
This is an awesome poem..im sorry about what happened, it must be horrible..you are a great writer though, keep it up 5/5 |
by shahadah
That was a great but sad poem.....keep doing wat u do |
5/5 OMG! That is so sad! I like the fact that u don't try to dress things up with fancy language, that u just say it how it is. Pleex Check out some of my poems! Thanx |
by Asingletear
Thats real sad, reli feel for you and the family, there is no excuse for a baby to die, but i guess we don hae that choice to say who can live and who cant. brill poem. |