Thats real sad, reli feel for you and the family, there is no excuse for a baby to die, but i guess we don hae that choice to say who can live and who cant. brill poem.

5/5 OMG! That is so sad! I like the fact that u don't try to dress things up with fancy language, that u just say it how it is. Pleex Check out some of my poems! Thanx

That was a great but sad poem.....keep doing wat u do

This is an awesome poem..im sorry about what happened, it must be horrible..you are a great writer though, keep it up 5/5

Omg!! thats great so peacfully sad but also perfectiant its just great and so very deep sorry for there loss but by any chance are the childrens name jake, mitcheal and ive forgoten the other name
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