Omg, I loved this poem completely. The vocabulary, emotion, and power beind it is positively mind blowing. Excellent job. 5/5

There are not others problems to fix here, simply just our own.
((I loved this line))

Wow.. I really liked this poem.. It was very strong and I LOVED the rhyming scheme. That must have taken some time.. But great job doing it.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

AMAZING!!!
i love the ending stanza.
5/5 all the way!

Ok i liked this one more, very shadowy and mysterious and that's why i liked it i was abt to put 5/5 but there ws something missin, help me find it.mmmmm maybe u should make the lines better performed..