Faster and faster still

Thanks for the comment.
but yeh this is rele gd cos it gives u the oppurtunity to personalise it to yourself in a way. u can decide what she's running from etc. and really relate to it. keep it up
xxx

Hmm... this is interesting. its brings up questions of why she is running, what shes runnin from, and where the blood is coming from... i like it! thanks for the comment!
hannah

Good poem. it was very powerful and deep. Great Job.

&& thanks for the comment

This poem was very deep indeed. Expresses a lot in few words. I liked it. Keep it up.

Thanks for your comment :)

Thanks for the comment
good work
and sorry to hear that your dad died