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good work
and sorry to hear that your dad died

This poem was very deep indeed. Expresses a lot in few words. I liked it. Keep it up.

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Good poem. it was very powerful and deep. Great Job.

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Hmm... this is interesting. its brings up questions of why she is running, what shes runnin from, and where the blood is coming from... i like it! thanks for the comment!
hannah

Thanks for the comment.
but yeh this is rele gd cos it gives u the oppurtunity to personalise it to yourself in a way. u can decide what she's running from etc. and really relate to it. keep it up
xxx