I love you

by -The-Undying-   Aug 20, 2006


These words sometimes seem forbidden.
For in these lines, my true love is hidden.
You is all that I need.
With razor in hand, I watch as you bleed.

These times that I whipe your tears.
They are intent and craved.
I help you conquer your inner fears.
For years I have gone without you, feeling inslaved.

Love waiting for someone to make the first move.
You and me, have nothing to proove.
The you in us doesn't need to be removed.

Raining down from the heavens the tears these angels cry.
For today, my feeling won't die.
Lets forget about the past, spread our broken wings and fly.

I love you, is that what you want?
For in my dreams heart ache still appears to haunt.
I love you, this is what I want.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    The you in us doesn't need to be removed.
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    OMG that line. WOW! i absolutely positively LOVED it. something about it idk what but something just touched me ALOT! this poem was very cute and sweet your emotions flowed out perfectly. it was beautifully written. great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~DaYiS~

    W!! u don't find ppl like u very often, u knew that?? how come u r tellin everyone that they r cool writers when u r an exelent one??? i admire u!! u r kinda like my idol!! great poems u got here, love it!!!!!!!!!! ~DaYiS~

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    I think it's very good and there's a lot of wonderful imagery in the words you have here. I just think the flow is a little disjointed, and mostly that can probably be put to a lack of any coherent pattern. All in all it's quite good, though :)

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl i like the sctructure of this poem. very well written. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    You is all that I need.
    ((You are all ...))
    These times that I whipe your tears
    ((wipe))
    For years I have gone without you, feeling inslaved.
    ((enslaved))

    Not you're best love poem, but it was very good... I'm not sure what to say about it though, do forgive me.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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