by -The-Undying- Aug 20, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Was I dreaming? |
Great style and it reminds me about my love |
I thought this was more of a story than a poem, really...I also thought you were trying to rhyme too much...again =P The flow was...not exactly very well done. It could still be worked on a little more. =) xoxo 5/5 |
by dora
Beautifully written. very touching. great job xx |
Wow.. I loved this... It's simply amazing. It's very unlike the rest of the love poems you hear about...God it's amazing. Great job. |