Wow.. I loved this... It's simply amazing. It's very unlike the rest of the love poems you hear about...God it's amazing. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Beautifully written. very touching. great job xx

I thought this was more of a story than a poem, really...I also thought you were trying to rhyme too much...again =P The flow was...not exactly very well done. It could still be worked on a little more. =) xoxo 5/5

Samantha

Great style and it reminds me about my love