O thats quite sad but very good poem please comment on my poems

Wow, it's very saddening. I liked it though. Beautifully written but need to fix up the errors =] But overall I liked it. I can kinda relate to it. Well done. Keep up the great work. Don't kill yourself though =] That would be bad. Anyways, I'll shut up now and give you 5/5 =] Email me if you like.
Much Love,
Rayne x3

Peace