Great poem. Rhyming was great and it had a nice flow. I'm so sorry this happened.

LAME!!!! sorry but that guys a prick...everyone deserves second chances...i gave my girl another chance...technically even three so wtheck is this guy doing...jeez. K sorry for the emotional outburst :P

i love the poem tho and once again he sux...but i think you might be surprised how fast he could change into a hypocrite...love the poem great emotion nice storyline k anyways i love it lol THE END!

This was another heartrending piece. I especially loved the message on the whole, 'twas absolutely lovely and bittersweet. It held so much emotions which are absolutely poignant, I dare say. Lovely poem. I hope you all the best and take care.