Its a really great poem
ill like your different approach to poetry.
5/5
~Emah

Hey darl avery well written. good job on this. great use of words. thank u so much for ur comments on my poems. meant alot!! =D xx

I really liked the first stanza, it had a lot of meaning. The part about the angels not flying, that was brilliant. I wish I had thought of that line first. I thought it was a great poem, and I ofter have premonitions. They sometimes scare me, but I try hard to clue in to what is going to happen.

That is really good. It's very different, and it has a nice flow and rhythm. There is one grammatical error that I thought I would point out. On the second line on the second stanza you have:
On nights like this my, thinkings not right.
The comma should be after miss, and there should also be an apostrophe after the g on thinkings. That way it read my thinking is not right. But this was a well written poem and sounds very well thought out. Great job on this! 5/5

Oops.. sorry on the comma part, I meant this not miss. Sorry once again!

Ooo! I liked this one. =) I liked the title, simple yet meaningful, and I liked the words you chose out. Great write! =) xxoo 5/5

Samantha

Grrr I am so mad. I wrote you the longest comment and then my computer did something crazy =/ i have no idea what it said. but it went something like this. " WOW! I can't even comment on this b/c i don't know what to say. I am completely speechless this showed exactly how life is. well some people's. you expressed your words amazingly" so yepp lol there ya go!