I found it a bit weak b themeaning, u have good rhymes but weak words .good meaning and message though. keep on the ggod work

I agree with Aline. it was good, very good, but lacked conviction. i hope ur ok Emma. love ya!
-Snoo xox

Hmm, rhyming 'beast' and 'cease' was stretching it a little bit. But I really liked the rest of the poem. Really neat imagery, although I would hate to picture that in real life. It was a very creative write. You really whipped up a creepy beast.

And the last is the song he sings.
((And the last what?))

I really liked this poem...it was very different yet very interesting. I just got lost at the end...But otherwise nicely done...Though I'm sorry to say, it looks like you got downrated. =[

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I like the nature element in it

He calls with a whinney,
And the last is the song he sings.
Aww that poem was almost sad. I loved it! It really cought my attention with the hole beast of white part. You are amazing and I think you should never ever stop writing!!!

Wow! that was reli gd and so sad! I reli liked it! keep it up!! ;)

Another great poem by you, you have showed your wonderful job here as well. I like your word choices in this one, it is very greatly written.
great job