A good piece of writing i felt. i feel its a shame that this poem got rated so poorly. i'll do my very best to boost its rating...5 out of five. anyway, i liked the length, and certainly what it was about, but what most intrigued me about your poem, was the way in which it was written. i feel it was in a simular style to my own. if you read mine (that's not a hint), you may or not agree, but i feel it's a correct statement. anyway, good poem

Brad

Really well written...

Oh I love the faith and optimism you create in this piece. It's truly enchanting.
You do have one mispelled word in this line:

"and new just what to do."

New should be knew....
Well done all the same. Keep it up~Holly

Great poemm!=) I lovee it! Thankss for the comment!! I tend to return the favors alot! Sooo comment on some more of mine!=) i would really appreciate it!! By the way the poem was GREAT!!!! i give it a 5/5 !! =)