It was incredible!! a real tear jerker. you have so much emotion in it, it's like you're mad at the person, i guessed, but at the same time, you're so sad to let go. i know how u feel! it was soo good!! omg!! |
by Lu
Car, |
by Chelsey
This makes me sad Car :-( I hate feeling so crummy like this girl, I hate it with a passion!! Your words really draw your readers into feeling how your feeling, I'm going to agree with Luanne on the tissue thing...even in your sad writes though, excellent wording! |
Whose this about, Car? Its sooooo sad but at the same time beautiful...aww. Girl! i love you!! |
Wow... i can see what you mean... amazing poem though hun and i hope you're alright. i'm going ok, although it's tough... i really thought i was ready to love again, but i guess i wasn't. but other than that, things are great. still playing my sports :P and schools ok. 10 more weeks and the semester's over (im in cegep). so yeah, im pretty much doing ok. how about you? |
by JamesP
My head was shouting too... |