Holding It In.....

by The Lonely Rose   Aug 20, 2006


Never in my life i have felt like this...
I want to cry but always hold it in...
I'm so depressed but hold it in...
No one notices....
I cry if i can't take it...but no one Holds me as i cry....
Like no ones there....
I want to cry everyday...
For so many reasons....
Inside I'm crying but on the outside I'm standing straight and tall like nothing is wrong at all.....
Inside I'm falling wanting to be caught....
If something happens....
I say that I'll be alright
People always say "oh she'll be alright..."
Even my family does that...
I'll never be alright...
I just pretend to be alright
Do they see me broken in my eyes..
Shattered....
Do they see that something is wrong with me..
Do i have problems..
Is it my fault for holding it in..
So no one will panic....
Its like everyday i put a fake smile on....
And they don't notices..
I picture myself screaming and Falling to the black abyss and everyone laughs....
Do i deserve to fall.....
It makes me want to cry and want someone to hold me and comfort me....
I want to let go but i can't..
I just can't....
When will someone catch me...
When will someone hold me as i cry...
I guess for now I'm holding it in...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amber Dawn

    Gabby...another wonderful one! i swear you get better everytime!it was WoW...just loved it! love ya always
    ~Amber Dawn~

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I really loved is poem, so beautifuly written.
    great job
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Really good. i enjoyed reading it and found the emotion really strong. great flow 2 : D keep writing xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Kind of disjointed and I'm not sure I like the repeated "..."s at the end of every line.

    It's got a good message but it really feels like a draft to me. I think you should think on it a bit and perhaps edit it up a bit (typos, spelling, grammar as well) and it'd be fantastic.

    Just my two cents.

  • 18 years ago

    by alwaysremeniceus

    =( so sad... but.. i know how it feels... even though i supposively have someone to catch me... half the time he just lets me fall...
    no one deserves to fall, but it is kind of our choice for holding it in, its just how people are, we hate to show our weaknesses...
    anyways, you can email me if you like to talk, take care?

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