Comments : My Dream Includes You

  • Omg, I love it!! Absolutely love it. It's so cute and I can totally relate to it. Beautifully written and heartfelt. Well done. Keep up the fabulous work!! 5/5 =]
    Much Love,
    Rayne x3

    Peace

  • 18 years ago

    by Rheingold

    "I tell you my dreams
    And how I want to succeed
    But all i want really
    Is for you to be with me"

    Excellent! I like this poem.

    Imagining how many people want to tell the one they love this... keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    I like this poem a lot...you bring a person into this poem showing them how you feel...5/5
    good job