Comments : When you dream, dear baby

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    I loved this... it reminded me of Shel Silversteins work. It was remarkable the way you tied in fantasy with the reality that you'll still be there when dreams are broken. Great write!

    Car

  • 18 years ago

    by Shauni

    Wow, this is an amazing poem. It's because I love poems that have things about dreams! Lol :) Good job! I like all the words you used :) -Shauni