by Carlee Ann
I loved this... it reminded me of Shel Silversteins work. It was remarkable the way you tied in fantasy with the reality that you'll still be there when dreams are broken. Great write! |
by Shauni
Wow, this is an amazing poem. It's because I love poems that have things about dreams! Lol :) Good job! I like all the words you used :) -Shauni |