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by x325xRunawayTrainx103x Aug 21, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / grieving, loss
I count the minutes that've past Since i last saw your face You left a permanent memory Here in this silent, lonely place I can still hear your voice In the dead of night I can still feel your touch When things are not alright I would give my life To see you for one more day Just one more time To say what i want to say I accepted the fact I understand that you're gone Even though i don't know why Or what possibly went wrong... I still visit where you sleep As i lay a rose to the ground I sweep off your stone And talk when nobody else is around You promised me you wouldn't leave But that's the only promise you didn't keep I still have so much pain So much pain, it shoots so deep But i promised to love you forever To never leave your side After everything i said to you Never have i ever lied So if that means talking to the ground Then that's what i have to do And I'll do it until i die Since i promised to never leave you
by Amberinaa
Good job. Great piece of work. Agree with the imagery. definitly beautiful 5/5 :D
by Sarah
This is really great. I liked reading it. Painted a very vivid picture of grief. I know the feeling. Hope you are well.