Sweet Sin

by End Of Eternity   Aug 21, 2006


Shades of your hair doesn't matter
when the dress slips from your skin
our dreams would never ever shatter
as we begin to cherish our sweet sin

those long nails won't scratch my heart
while searching for an existing soul in my chest
i feel your hands playing with my patience
& wonder when every edge of mine would rest

depth of your eyes won't penetrate my sanity
while they stare at my naked soul with intensity
feelings of being loved for the first time rises within
with the burning desire of recreating my own destiny

warmth of your arms won't shake my will
as they surround me completely with thrill
our dreams would never ever shatter
as we begin to cherish our sweet sin

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a beautiful poem. This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. Excellent writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I've never seen a poem written in this way with the contradictry term, 'sweet sin' but you pulled it off brilliantly.
    Your work is fab. Especially this piece
    5/5 as always
    *Gem*

    (And it's at 2am when the chair cravings hit most, lmao)

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Sweet sin. it's a beautiful way to describe love. great work, as always.

    peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Oh, this is wonderful. I love the way you played with the subject, and placed the words. This is really well done. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by purva bhatia

    Huh!

    m always out of words while commenting on your poems cause all the words seem too less to appreciate your work.....
    if talent there in your grey matter is to be taken as a mighty ocean then this poem is definetely a Pearl!!!!!

    love
    purva

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