Hey darl very descriptive and detailed. great use of words. very well written and structured!!! =) keep em coming xx

Sweet saucy loving and beautiful great poem hon keep them coming xox me

Oh geez. lol I think you KNOW what i mean by that!! WHEW...**knees go weak* GREAT job...you're words are beautiful, passionate, and everything about them is just simply amazing...you blow me away.

This was a great read 5/5
nice job :)

It totally was a sweet sin, without hesitation! Lol...Amazing work, my friend, and beautifully described! The flow worked perfectly as well. And with such a wonderful poem it is easy for me to give you a 5, of course. Keep it up!
Love,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

I did vote for this poem and I totally loved it..
thanks my inspiration..you're so wonderful and your love poems are so perfect the way you write them, from the heart...so heartfelt and meaningful

missed all your work but actually I'm bak so Ill comment on all your other poems which I missed...prepare =P

Good Luck And Take Care
Luv
NemO xxxxxxxxxxx

I thought I commented on this. Oh well. This was just sweet. I love it. I love most of your poems...lol. Beautiful write.

[[ Poetess ]]

Wow.... this is an awesome poem. So full of passion. This is the first time you wrote such a sensual poem like this, and you've done a great job. Loved every line.

Sorry for the late comment.

Love
Michelle

Damn ur really good....well describe!

Nice everything... description and structurally very sound!

Huh!

m always out of words while commenting on your poems cause all the words seem too less to appreciate your work.....
if talent there in your grey matter is to be taken as a mighty ocean then this poem is definetely a Pearl!!!!!

love
purva

Oh, this is wonderful. I love the way you played with the subject, and placed the words. This is really well done. xx

Sweet sin. it's a beautiful way to describe love. great work, as always.

peace
shobhana

I've never seen a poem written in this way with the contradictry term, 'sweet sin' but you pulled it off brilliantly.
Your work is fab. Especially this piece
5/5 as always
*Gem*

(And it's at 2am when the chair cravings hit most, lmao)

What a beautiful poem. This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. Excellent writing!