by Melissa S. Masucci Aug 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Little girls grow up |
by swill
I SO agree with Bret....you killed it by the last line. |
So very happy for you. Your loves shows in your poetry. :) |
Awww thats so sweet!! :') I'm jealous >.< lol. Sometimes I wish my boyfriend will always be my Prince Charming instead of the occasional ass he is.. (like now) x.x lol |
by Bret Higgins
This is a good poem that is killed by the last line. |
by Darien
Aww that was a sweet poem, and you are very lucky you have found your Knight in Shining Armor. It seems like a little hypocritical when they no longer believe and tell their kids. Heh, but I'm sure the ones that fall in love tell the better story. Really nice piece. For some reason it reminded me of Shrek :P |