Your Day of Retribution

by Lady Vengeance   Aug 21, 2006


This is the start...
Of what will soon become....
Your day of retribution.

They hate you
And you hate them too
The manipulation
Of the honest few

The lies been told
Won' go unheard
Fake....
The truest word

Never die
The coils of blood
Seeping...
From white rose bud

Hold it
Crush it in your hands
The plastic smiles
And bleeding hands

They'll fear your truth....

This is the start...
Of what will soon become....
Your day of retribution.

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  • 18 years ago

    by President Dead

    I like this poem so much, Like omg it's incredible. I don't remember reading it before, but apparently I have.
    I love how dark this poem is, and reading it slowly really emphasises the darkness in the poem, it flows brilliantly.
    Awesome poem Sexy Suzie.
    Mwah

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    I didn't really get the feel from this
    poem that I got from reading your
    others. There seems to be alot that
    is missing. I liked the poem though
    because it's original so I give you a
    5/5 for your hard work that I know you
    put into it.

    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    Another great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by StefQ

    Original piece of work,
    i liked the imager, the poem has something to it , unexplainable, i dont know i guess thats why i liked it :)

    5/5

    ~StefQ

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Hm...I'm not sure what to say, here. I really liked it, yet I didn't... I loved the thought put into the poem, but it didn't have the...flow to it, I guess, that I felt should have been there. But it was very nicely done. Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5